给英文主页的几个建议 主页, 英文, 建议

knightk

1 那个"酷图欣赏"(虽然在英文主页上没有文字说明)所展示的皮肤上带有汉字——既然是英文版，就给几个纯英文的图片嘛！

2 download按钮旁边有个"more download",个人意见改为more downloads

3 页面最底端有个"coperate"，个人认为是"cooperate"的拼写错误（确实没有找到coperate这个词，而且中文页面下面也写着"合作推广"）

4 "FAQ and help"可以合称"help center", 现在的说法看上去有些累赘。

以上都是个人意见，仅供参考。

vistafans

lz好眼力
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duckZCX

TheWorld Browser is a fast, safe, completely and easy way to browse the Web. It can take you max page compatiabilty with more features.
Try it now, it's no third software addon, and absolutely free!

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下面是我修改的，本人底气不大足，不过应该比原版本的好

TheWorld Browser is a completely fast safe and wieldy one. It can take you max page compatiabilty with more features.
Just try it,and there's  no third party Add-ons, and absolutely free!

vistafans

原帖由 duckZCX 于 2007-4-1 15:06 发表
It can take you max page compatiabilty with more

take 是否改成 bring ？

phoenix

收到，明天让jkiller改

knightk

补充一下----

==原文[修改部分]==
TheWorld Browser is [a completely fast safe and wieldy one.] It [can take] you max page compatiabilty with [more] features.
[Just try it,and there's]  no third party Add-ons, and absolutely free!
====修改后====
TheWorld Browser is completely fast, safe and wieldy . It gives you max page *compatiabilty* with unique features.
Try it now, no third party add-ons, and absolutely free!

duckZCX

还要斟酌~偶好好想想~

Bring肯定更好3

knightk

那个compatiabilty没有查到，compatiability也没有查到，我不理解这个词，麻烦解释一下。

duckZCX

原帖由 knightk 于 2007-4-1 15:17 发表
补充一下----

==原文==
TheWorld Browser is  It  you max page compatiabilty with  features.
  no third party Add-ons, and absolutely free!
====修改后====
TheWorld Browser is completely fast, ...

一直琢磨“自主创新”这个词儿来着，unique放这儿貌似不大适合~

duckZCX

应该是compatibility
主页搞错了

knightk

compatibility是什么意思啊

rebirth

原帖由 duckZCX 于 2007-4-1 15:19 发表

一直琢磨“自主创新”这个词儿来着，unique放这儿貌似不大适合~

这个如何：creating essentials

[ 本帖最后由 rebirth 于 2007-4-4 10:28 编辑 ]