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huhuy 发表于 2007-4-17 00:09

英文版网页的问题

粗粗看了下英文版网页,觉得有不少问题,随便举几个例子(刚才辛辛苦苦写了一大段,被我不小心后退,全白写了:sad: ):

首先看英文版的Homepage,最开始的介绍:
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[table=500][tr][td][b][size=4][size=3][color=black]Why choose TheWorld Browser?[/color][/size][/size][/b][/td][/tr][/table][table=500][tr][td=1,1,138][img]http://www.ioage.com/en/images/lcd.jpg[/img][/td][td]TheWorld Browser is a fast, safe, [color=red]completely[/color] and easy way to browse the [color=black]Web[/color]. It can [color=red]take[/color] you max page [color=red]compatiabilty[/color] with more features.
Try it now[color=red], [/color][color=red]it's[/color] no third software [color=red]addon[/color], and absolutely free!
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completely是副词,这里应用形容词complete。compatibility拼错了。“[color=black]take you max page compatibility”想要表达的意思是什么?觉得至少应该用make代替take吧?[/color][color=#333333]Try it now后面直接跟句号。it改成There。addon应该用add-ons比较好。Try it [color=black]now, it's no third software addon,[/color] and absolutely free!这句话改成:Try it now! There is no third party add-ons. And it is absolutely free![/color]

再随便看看[url=http://www.ioage.com/en/product.htm]http://www.ioage.com/en/product.htm[/url]

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[table=530][tr][td][b]Intro[/b] [/td][/tr][/table][table=530][tr][td]TheWorld Browser is a tiny, fast, safe, [color=red]powerfull[/color], multi-tabbed with multi-threaded frame browser[color=red], it[/color] is a freeware with no function limited.

TheWorld Browser is compatible with [color=red]microsoft internet exploer[/color][color=red], it[/color] can run in [color=red]microsoft windows[/color] [color=red]serious[/color] system, such as windows98/me/2000/xp/vista.
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[color=#000000]powerful多打了个l,两个it应另起一句。[/color][color=black]microsoft internet exploer和microsoft windows[/color][color=#333333] 应首字母大写成M[color=#000000]icrosoft Internet Explorer和Microsoft Windows。注意原文中exploer也拼错了。serious是严肃的意思,这里应该用series,“系列”的意思吧?这个错误后面一段还有。[/color][/color]
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[color=#000000]随便看了看,失误还是很多的,说明革命尚未成功,同志仍需努力啊![/color]

[[i] 本帖最后由 huhuy 于 2007-4-17 00:11 编辑 [/i]]

愤怒的毛驴 发表于 2007-4-17 01:11

update log 词语拼写还有一些语法也是错误不少...

那巴尔 发表于 2007-4-17 01:18

问题很多:o

寄托天下 发表于 2007-4-17 01:59

翻译组目前正在修改,欢迎楼主提出改进建议!

mutalisker 发表于 2007-4-17 10:42

已经更新了,有问题随时联系

lunakoo 发表于 2007-4-17 10:44

长见识了~

rebirth 发表于 2007-4-17 11:59

这个要支持,老大怎么不拉住楼主加入“嘉宾”:lol:

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